Monday, September 5, 2011

Lightning Bugs

Lightning Bugs

Sun is drifting down to the
horizon – brightening the
western sky.
Shadows are lengthening, spreading
across the lawn
children still run and play
for dark to beckon the
lightning bugs.

1 comment:

  1. Don't know if you take comments on style, but I like this although I would put a period after 'lawn' and have 'children' capitalized to start a new sentence.

    Great memories, images, and the perfect photo to accompany it.