The official blog of Bobbi Dawn Rightmyer, Kentucky author, poet, writer and storyteller
Monday, September 5, 2011
Lightning Bugs
Lightning Bugs
Sun is drifting down to the
horizon – brightening the
western sky.
Shadows are lengthening, spreading
across the lawn
children still run and play
for dark to beckon the
lightning bugs.
Don't know if you take comments on style, but I like this although I would put a period after 'lawn' and have 'children' capitalized to start a new sentence.
Great memories, images, and the perfect photo to accompany it.
Don't know if you take comments on style, but I like this although I would put a period after 'lawn' and have 'children' capitalized to start a new sentence.
ReplyDeleteGreat memories, images, and the perfect photo to accompany it.